Hi blog readers! This time I'm writing to you about the Nobel price and USA president Barack Obama. This information is taken from wikipedia with the the awesome highlighter, if you wont the original page click here.
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Barack Hussein Obama II
Born in August 4, 1961
Is the 44th and current President of the United States. He is the first African American to hold the office
Obama previously served as a United States Senator from Illinois, from January 2005 until he resigned following his victory in the 2008 presidential election.
Born in Honolulu, Hawaii, Obama is a graduate of Columbia University and Harvard Law School, where he was the president of the Harvard Law Review.
He worked as a civil rights attorney in Chicago and taught constitutional law at the University of Chicago Law School from 1992 to 2004.
In October 2009, Obama was named the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize laureate. As the nobel price archive says "For his extraordinary efforts to strengthen international diplomacy and cooperation between peoples."
In my opinion this Nobel price is like giving a Oscar to a director who hasn't made a film yet, he didn't deserve it yet. But with over time we realised he deserves it.
Some of your sentences need connecting better. On the other hand, I miss some further argumentation on your part: why didn't he deserve it then and why does he deserve it now? That would have been interesting.
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